"Royals" & "Fight With Tools" Intro REVISION

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Watch the video in the link below. Carefully consider the process I go through in making revisions. What do I change?  Why?  How do the changes affect the meaning?  Pay attention to the types of changes I make each time. What do they have in common?

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